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HIPHOPHEAD
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| Posted Wed Nov 12, 2008
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Yo whats goin on.. this is my first post just wanted to get some feed back on a rap/poem i wrote called The Perfect Place...
I put the palm of my left hand right where my heart is//
And plegde alegiance to the U.S of Garbage//
Im Honest when i say we got an abnoxious office//
Cops is lockin us up in boxed coffins..like locksmiths//
Its Nonsence if u ask the kid//
And after this generation its gonna be worse//
With clonning goin on and whips acting like birds..//
Sit back and rehearse the verse how bad does it hurt//
To know that Americas gonna be takin us under//
and the number of hungry children is something i wonder about//
they got us chained up like some dogs in a pound//
hearin us holler and shout.."WHER IS GOD IN THIS TOWN"//
Hes Gotta be found right now, were desperatly in need//
Of a better life something like the american dream//
Please just let me be me and please just let me be free//
Im in need give me a peak i need to see the Perfect Place//
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