We're at the bottom,
We're barely breathing.
Last in line,
But we're not leaving.
Pressure weighs down, we try to cope.
Down on our luck, but we've got hope.
Losing, fading.
Don't know where we're heading
But the disease is spreading.
Took the chance,
Missed the mark.
The road ahead
Is looking dark.
Pressure weighs down, we try to cope.
Down on our luck, but we've got hope.
Losing, fading.
Don't know where we're heading
But the disease is spreading.
Took the chance,
Missed the mark.
The road ahead is looking dark.
Road ahead is looking dark.
Guest
Posted Tue May 27, 2008
your poem makes me depressed.
Guest
Posted Tue May 27, 2008
I hate sad poems, it brings me down.
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1633
Posted Sat Jun 07, 2008
now make a happy poem dawg (:
_________________ & you'll nevuuh catch me slippin, cuz im too fly to fall(:
lk8two Guest
Posted Sun Jun 08, 2008
What was this poem about, specifically?
Bourne Guest
Posted Sat Jun 21, 2008
Anonymous wrote:
We're at the bottom,
We're barely breathing.
Last in line,
But we're not leaving.
Pressure weighs down, we try to cope.
Down on our luck, but we've got hope.
Losing, fading.
Don't know where we're heading
But the disease is spreading.
Took the chance,
Missed the mark.
The road ahead
Is looking dark.
Pressure weighs down, we try to cope.
Down on our luck, but we've got hope.
Losing, fading.
Don't know where we're heading
But the disease is spreading.
Took the chance,
Missed the mark.
The road ahead is looking dark.
Road ahead is looking dark.
Oh okay, so the goverment was trying to kill him the whole time?!
Guest
Posted Sat Sep 06, 2008
Bourne wrote:
Anonymous wrote:
We're at the bottom,
We're barely breathing.
Last in line,
But we're not leaving.
Pressure weighs down, we try to cope.
Down on our luck, but we've got hope.
Losing, fading.
Don't know where we're heading
But the disease is spreading.
Took the chance,
Missed the mark.
The road ahead
Is looking dark.
Pressure weighs down, we try to cope.
Down on our luck, but we've got hope.
Losing, fading.
Don't know where we're heading
But the disease is spreading.
Took the chance,
Missed the mark.
The road ahead is looking dark.
Road ahead is looking dark.
Oh okay, so the goverment was trying to kill him the whole time?!
Yes. I think it was his old boss or something.
DarkSith Guest
Posted Mon Sep 08, 2008
your poem sucks get the fug out of here w/this weak shit!
