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mr. ?
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| Posted: Wed May 28, 2008 |
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| post away. |
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| Posted: Thu May 29, 2008 |
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| why does the subject say tikniik? is that you? |
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tikkbaby.
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| Posted: Fri May 30, 2008 |
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nahh he aint cool 'nuff to be tiknik (: lol .
ily walrus:] |
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eyOjuiCy
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| Posted: Sun Jun 15, 2008 |
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lalalalallala. i miss dis thread.
quick question thoe , does anyone actually read my poems ?
yete ayo, den ill post some like da old times.
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hkd1
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| Posted: Sun Jun 15, 2008 |
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| post them! post them! post them! post them! post them! |
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eyOjuiCy
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| Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 |
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lol
really? (:
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hkd1
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| Posted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 |
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| still awaiting, and beleive me I'm a severe critic |
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eyOjuiCy
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| Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 |
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ta dahhh (:
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hkd1
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| Posted: Wed Jun 18, 2008 |
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I read your poem and read it again, well eyo why did you choose the theme of cowardise?
apart that we know that you enjoy life and are a happy person, your poem reflects anxiety and fear, it's like you want to get rid of something and express it in this way, may be it's your age .. with all the apprehensions about the future, btw how were your end of year exams ? |
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eyOjuiCy
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well, as u may already know, i write poems with different themes.
this one happens to be about cowards.
it doesnt only say that cowards dont change their way, but it also says that there is a coward in us too ( the U & the S in bold )
i write what i feel, how i see things. sometimes i look at things form a distance and sometimes i get under its skin .depends on my mood actually. (:
sometimes i make my feelings obvious and sometimes i say it witout saying it.
&& im done with my exams. i passed them all 
<3
and, if u enjoyed/liked this poem, lemme know if u want other ones <3 !
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ChiLlaXiN
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| Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 |
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| eyOjuiCy wrote: | | ...it doesnt only say that cowards dont change their way... |
lolz..."Karmir kov e ira kashin chi pokhi." |
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hkd1
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| Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 |
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glad to hear you passed all yr exams,
sure pls post other poems also, btw do you post poems just immediatley after writing them or you compose regularily, keep them and choose later one to post, and pls if you have a lot in stock, pls do not loose them, someday may be you could have the opportunity to publish them
ah, also forgot to mention that your poem is technically well composed and the choice of the words perfect |
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Darth-Vader
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| Posted: Thu Jun 19, 2008 |
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| I havnt read any of your poems yet, so sue me. |
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eyOjuiCy
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| Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 |
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| ChiLlaXiN wrote: | | eyOjuiCy wrote: | | ...it doesnt only say that cowards dont change their way... |
lolz..."Karmir kov e ira kashin chi pokhi." |
thats my favorite quote & damn right its true :]
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eyOjuiCy
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| Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 |
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| hkd1 wrote: | glad to hear you passed all yr exams,
sure pls post other poems also, btw do you post poems just immediatley after writing them or you compose regularily, keep them and choose later one to post, and pls if you have a lot in stock, pls do not loose them, someday may be you could have the opportunity to publish them
ah, also forgot to mention that your poem is technically well composed and the choice of the words perfect |
ah thank you <3 i love my poems too. lol
um, sometimes i write them when i 'feel' like it, sometimes it comes to me and dats when i write them. i post random ones btw (:
<3
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