Official Tiikniik Poem Thread

mr. ? · Guest

post away.

Guest · Posted Thu May 29, 2008

why does the subject say tikniik? is that you?

tikkbaby. · Guest

nahh he aint cool 'nuff to be tiknik (: lol .

ily walrus:]

eyOjuiCy · Supreme Member Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 930

lalalalallala. i miss dis thread.

quick question thoe , does anyone actually read my poems ?

yete ayo, den ill post some like da old times.

(:
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dont be flattered, i call em all baby cuz i forget names (:

hkd1 · Member Joined: 13 Jun 2008 Posts: 61

post them! post them! post them! post them! post them!

eyOjuiCy · Supreme Member Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 930

lol
really? (:
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hkd1 · Member Joined: 13 Jun 2008 Posts: 61

still awaiting, and beleive me I'm a severe critic

eyOjuiCy · Supreme Member Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 930

ta dahhh (:
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dont be flattered, i call em all baby cuz i forget names (:

hkd1 · Member Joined: 13 Jun 2008 Posts: 61

I read your poem and read it again, well eyo why did you choose the theme of cowardise?
apart that we know that you enjoy life and are a happy person, your poem reflects anxiety and fear, it's like you want to get rid of something and express it in this way, may be it's your age .. with all the apprehensions about the future, btw how were your end of year exams ?

eyOjuiCy · Supreme Member Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 930

well, as u may already know, i write poems with different themes.
this one happens to be about cowards.
it doesnt only say that cowards dont change their way, but it also says that there is a coward in us too ( the U & the S in bold )
i write what i feel, how i see things. sometimes i look at things form a distance and sometimes i get under its skin .depends on my mood actually. (:
sometimes i make my feelings obvious and sometimes i say it witout saying it.

&& im done with my exams. i passed them all Very Happy

<3

and, if u enjoyed/liked this poem, lemme know if u want other ones <3 !
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dont be flattered, i call em all baby cuz i forget names (:

ChiLlaXiN · Supreme Member Joined: 12 Jun 2008 Posts: 211

hkd1 · Member Joined: 13 Jun 2008 Posts: 61

glad to hear you passed all yr exams,
sure pls post other poems also, btw do you post poems just immediatley after writing them or you compose regularily, keep them and choose later one to post, and pls if you have a lot in stock, pls do not loose them, someday may be you could have the opportunity to publish them
ah, also forgot to mention that your poem is technically well composed and the choice of the words perfect

Darth-Vader · Guest

I havnt read any of your poems yet, so sue me.

eyOjuiCy · Supreme Member Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 930

eyOjuiCy · Supreme Member Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 930