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LK82 Bronze Member

 Joined: 21 Mar 2008 Posts: 445
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Posted: 04/24/08 |
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Post your poems
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LK82 Bronze Member

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Posted: 04/24/08 |
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Enduring the Sea
This ship had long sailed but the port went fishing
As the ship struggles to return what’s missing
The men are half-yelling, fearing their fears
But a captain he is, his conscience un-queried.
Opened the sky and out came season
Tears of heaven surrounding his reason
Never wet or tired from thoughts
Like the woman he loves dancing his thoughts.
For whom is this story darkened by season
Darkened or dark-struck without a reason
Yet reason has no cure from time or season
Colors his thoughts and confirms his reason.
A man stands on planks and shines a hope
Sailing into the wind awaiting a moment of truth
A moment to prove to men his sails are not loose
His ship was once lost but now has returned
Silence from the men whose fears unconfirmed
Quite as the captain ponders his moment
Planned his success now plans his next moment.
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LK82 Bronze Member

 Joined: 21 Mar 2008 Posts: 445
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Posted: 04/26/08 |
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I wrote this awhile back. I just recently revised it.
"Darkness of love"
Has he gotten to close, their passionate night
Arouses her most, shall he cease the wonder of his body to hers
Yet his heart's on fire for her touch so divine
Proceed they may with consequences of flames
Eternal abyss in exchange for this day.
He no longer could hold the lust in his heart
Fallen to an angel with lips of his heart
She feels the same way, but silence of words
As their bodies recite a hymn of two birds
Their moves like a choir of loving in chorus
While he mediates their love with breathtaking glories
Her voice sings with screams of joys in his arms
As they paint the nights end as lovers in arms.
But amazing the game which fate has played
Its heart a castle without a slave
Concealed in dark the showing of this day
That cruelty of her mind was to his display
Castaway into shadows seeking shelter from love
And the pain his mind has brought to heart
The pain of emptiness from her touch
Is he ever to be himself without her tender kiss.
They were set to be one as lovers' in arms
And would never part their eternal hearts
To walk down a path of holly truth
Swearing to each other binding words
Would take each other as who they may be
And would love one another for all eternity
Yet he did not seek love, but a love worth seeking
A slave to his feelings, wanting what existed only in mind
To want who was a stranger that warms like no other
And yet a faded idea, clouded as unknown by the one he loved
A prisoner in heart with chains of gold
Priceless to those who can spend it, but for him a mere taunting feeling
Of possessing so much thought and so little reality
War at all fronts of emotions
How he could make this agony end!
Turned to painful fading of love, like the suns shade into depths of the night
A mere memory of what shined once so bright
But it is called love for no simple reason.
So many know the way he feels the heaviness in his mind
Yet he struggles alone to let this go since failure is not his own
No one to care no one to know what his life has brought him see
Silent cries within a heart which no ears can set him free
Evil thoughts creep thru his head as night comes at hand
Perhaps a struggle to let this go, the heaviness which has fused his blood
Grown a depression from this illness of weak self control
He no longer can stop the forbidden pleasure of poison in his soul
Prowls the nights as a soulless man in search of a quick fix
What he's become so young and pure with endless choices to fulfill a wish
No chains held him down strong enough to keep him from success
No longer a man but a monster who knows no truth no question worth to answer
No path to walk unless it leads to this poison he's grown to love
Addicted to death with clear explanation to why he's become this way
No clear way to avoid this day no way to leave his pain.
The man was in love under clouds of rain with no shelter to ease his strains
He turned to a last hope in escaping hurt the only way he knew how
On his stone he wrote should be written, and the following is how
"Passion of love turns to death of a man"
As he closed with a final breath...........No longer a sound.
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tikniik Supreme Member

 Joined: 16 Aug 2007 Posts: 2727 Location: *PrinCesS LanD*
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| LK82 wrote: |
But amazing the game which fate has played
Its heart a castle without a slave
Concealed in dark the showing of this day
That cruelty of her mind was to his display
Yet he did not seek love, but a love worth seeking
A slave to his feelings, wanting what existed only in mind
The man was in love under clouds of rain with no shelter to ease his strains
He turned to a last hope in escaping hurt the only way he knew how |
i loveeeeed those parts ! (:
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thistooshallpass Member

 Joined: 27 Nov 2007 Posts: 101
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Posted: 05/08/08 |
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| LK82 wrote: |
Of possessing so much thought and so little reality
War at all fronts of emotions. |
Thought provoking.
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