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HYE MD

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Location: In Her Heart

PostPosted: 02/24/07   Reply with quote

She knocked on my door
Wearing all White and
Greeted me with a smile
That was pure and shy

I knew from the start that
This was going to be different
I knew not why yet somehow
I knew it was right

She asked to come in
I did not know why
I hadn't let anyone in
For such a long time

Before she could step in
I noticed her dress again
It was not as white as
I had thought it was

I decided to let her in
She walked in with a smile
That had me mesmerized
From that moment on

Once she was inside
I looked into her eyes
They were so deep that
Made oceans seem small

When I looked at her again
She was dressed in Red
I asked her how but
She ran for the door

She opened the door but
Did not walk out instead
Threw back her golden hair
And gave me a tantalizing look

From that moment on
She took away my soul
And made me a stranger
In My own Home

She sits there smiling
But won't let me close
Says I might hurt her
If I try to get to close

Now I sit here alone
Wondering why and how
Did I end up a stranger?
Under my own roof

My heart is my Home
She is the one I want
Will I ever have her?
That only She knows.



Sofiiah818

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Location: on your mind.

PostPosted: 02/25/07   Reply with quote

very interesting. i love it.


BrnAzn

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Joined: 21 Aug 2006
Posts: 527

PostPosted: 05/13/07   Reply with quote



I'm tired of waiting for you.

I'm sorry.


nonameca

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Joined: 26 May 2007
Posts: 51

PostPosted: 05/30/07   Reply with quote

Hi I liked the poem very poetic and creative very cool


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PostPosted: 03/12/08   Reply with quote

HYE MD wrote:
She knocked on my door
Wearing all White and
Greeted me with a smile
That was pure and shy

I knew from the start that
This was going to be different
I knew not why yet somehow
I knew it was right

She asked to come in
I did not know why
I hadn't let anyone in
For such a long time

Before she could step in
I noticed her dress again
It was not as white as
I had thought it was

I decided to let her in
She walked in with a smile
That had me mesmerized
From that moment on

Once she was inside
I looked into her eyes
They were so deep that
Made oceans seem small

When I looked at her again
She was dressed in Red
I asked her how but
She ran for the door

She opened the door but
Did not walk out instead
Threw back her golden hair
And gave me a tantalizing look

From that moment on
She took away my soul
And made me a stranger
In My own Home

She sits there smiling
But won't let me close
Says I might hurt her
If I try to get to close

Now I sit here alone
Wondering why and how
Did I end up a stranger?
Under my own roof

My heart is my Home
She is the one I want
Will I ever have her?
That only She knows.


Oh okay, so it was the dead girl's ghost that was killing everyone?


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PostPosted: 04/22/08   Reply with quote

I think the poem was about this dead chick that was like talking to everyone else, creepy.
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