eyo, tough your'e replying to the guest above , just want to say that also sometimes reading all the posts in various topics take so much time that there's no room to reply for any particular thread, but beleive me your poems don't pass unread, and continue posting them, it's a fresh air in the site
aw thank you.
i sometimes stop posting my poems cuz i dont get feedback.
and number 6....procrastinating isnt wat im tryin 2 say.
yesterday is history & tomorrow is a mystery.
<3
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eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738
Posted Tue Jul 01, 2008
gone.
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eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738
Posted Tue Jul 01, 2008
Darth-Vader wrote:
Eyo, nice poem.
yanmte u read it.
0_O
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eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738
Posted Wed Aug 13, 2008
(:
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eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738
Posted Wed Aug 13, 2008
mod mi hat do me a fave & delete the unnessesary replies after my new poem.
i dont like it when people get off topic in this thread.
thnk you.
[mod09: Done. Redundant posts removed]
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Jose Guest
Posted Wed Aug 13, 2008
jeez, u can't take any criticism can you?
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738
Posted Wed Aug 13, 2008
from you, no.
your's isnt criticism, they are words from a horny man.
vanish !
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Guest
Posted Sat Aug 16, 2008
roses are red, violets are blue
she is fudge hot
Jose Guest
Posted Mon Aug 18, 2008
Never will I vanish, except when I'm a ninja.
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738
Posted Mon Aug 18, 2008
just grab a pair of scissors & start running around in my back yard.
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Jose Guest
Posted Tue Aug 19, 2008
eyOjuiCy wrote:
just grab a pair of scissors & start running around in my back yard.
ok, but hopefully I won't run into you with the scissors in my hand
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738
Posted Tue Aug 19, 2008
Jose wrote:
eyOjuiCy wrote:
just grab a pair of scissors & start running around in my back yard.
ok, but hopefully I won't run into you with the scissors in my hand
nah dont worry. anything plastic or fake doesnt harm me. :D
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Jose Guest
Posted Tue Aug 19, 2008
ok you're dumb
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738
Posted Tue Aug 19, 2008
ur 5otimes worse burro. (:
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ThaR3al3stSixx26 Member
Joined: 30 Jun 2008 Posts: 99 Location: pasadena
Posted Tue Aug 19, 2008
eh my life has been twisted up side down
i dont know what i want and i have on a frown
thought my life would be good
but i now know it never would
im never fully content with what i have
want two things but only one i can
im in a phaze of desicion and i am confused
i feel no matter what i choose im destined to loose
so now im feinding for a blunt or a bowl
to take a hit and see my life pass by slow-mo
my life was destined my path was paved
now im at a toll stop and now its time to pay
i give in happiness and i take out grief
and god is the only one who might sieze
my life is like a rocky terrain
it has its ups and downs but in all its the same
always evening out never really on a mountain
wishing there was somthing of youth like a fountain
eternal happiness is what im doubtin
i guess if it wasnt for the bad the good wouldnt be
so im take this in the worst posibility
and when im climbing my mountain i can pause and smell the fresh air
cuz my next drop ; god... it will not scare
its kool
Guest
Posted Wed Aug 20, 2008
nice, you wrote it yourself?
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738
Posted Wed Aug 20, 2008
i liked it sak (:
ur raps are better thoe. :]
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ThaR3al3stSixx26 Member
Joined: 30 Jun 2008 Posts: 99 Location: pasadena
Posted Wed Aug 20, 2008
yeee i wrote it
its alright...
btw juicy its hovo. haha
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738
Posted Wed Aug 20, 2008
you said sako 0_O
liar.
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