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| Posted Wed May 28, 2008
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| post away. |
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| Posted Thu May 29, 2008
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| why does the subject say tikniik? is that you? |
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tikkbaby.
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| Posted Fri May 30, 2008
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nahh he aint cool 'nuff to be tiknik (: lol .
ily walrus:] |
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eyOjuiCy
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| Posted Sun Jun 15, 2008
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lalalalallala. i miss dis thread.
quick question thoe , does anyone actually read my poems ?
yete ayo, den ill post some like da old times.
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hkd1
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| Posted Sun Jun 15, 2008
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| post them! post them! post them! post them! post them! |
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eyOjuiCy
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| Posted Mon Jun 16, 2008
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lol
really? (:
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hkd1
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| Posted Tue Jun 17, 2008
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| still awaiting, and beleive me I'm a severe critic |
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eyOjuiCy
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| Posted Wed Jun 18, 2008
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ta dahhh (:
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hkd1
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| Posted Wed Jun 18, 2008
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I read your poem and read it again, well eyo why did you choose the theme of cowardise?
apart that we know that you enjoy life and are a happy person, your poem reflects anxiety and fear, it's like you want to get rid of something and express it in this way, may be it's your age .. with all the apprehensions about the future, btw how were your end of year exams ? |
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eyOjuiCy
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well, as u may already know, i write poems with different themes.
this one happens to be about cowards.
it doesnt only say that cowards dont change their way, but it also says that there is a coward in us too ( the U & the S in bold )
i write what i feel, how i see things. sometimes i look at things form a distance and sometimes i get under its skin .depends on my mood actually. (:
sometimes i make my feelings obvious and sometimes i say it witout saying it.
&& im done with my exams. i passed them all 
<3
and, if u enjoyed/liked this poem, lemme know if u want other ones <3 !
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| eyOjuiCy wrote: | | ...it doesnt only say that cowards dont change their way... |
lolz..."Karmir kov e ira kashin chi pokhi." |
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hkd1
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| Posted Thu Jun 19, 2008
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glad to hear you passed all yr exams,
sure pls post other poems also, btw do you post poems just immediatley after writing them or you compose regularily, keep them and choose later one to post, and pls if you have a lot in stock, pls do not loose them, someday may be you could have the opportunity to publish them
ah, also forgot to mention that your poem is technically well composed and the choice of the words perfect |
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Darth-Vader
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| I havnt read any of your poems yet, so sue me. |
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eyOjuiCy
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| ChiLlaXiN wrote: | | eyOjuiCy wrote: | | ...it doesnt only say that cowards dont change their way... |
lolz..."Karmir kov e ira kashin chi pokhi." |
thats my favorite quote & damn right its true :]
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eyOjuiCy
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| Posted Fri Jun 20, 2008
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| hkd1 wrote: | glad to hear you passed all yr exams,
sure pls post other poems also, btw do you post poems just immediatley after writing them or you compose regularily, keep them and choose later one to post, and pls if you have a lot in stock, pls do not loose them, someday may be you could have the opportunity to publish them
ah, also forgot to mention that your poem is technically well composed and the choice of the words perfect |
ah thank you <3 i love my poems too. lol
um, sometimes i write them when i 'feel' like it, sometimes it comes to me and dats when i write them. i post random ones btw (:
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eyOjuiCy
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| Darth-Vader wrote: | | I havnt read any of your poems yet, so sue me. |
if you mean u didnt read this one poem i posted up, its okay.
if u mean u didnt read any of my poems and pretended like u did, -____- die. (:
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eyOjuiCy
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| Posted Fri Jun 20, 2008
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:( hetuyks tsavuma =/
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Darth-Vader
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| eyOjuiCy wrote: | | Darth-Vader wrote: | | I havnt read any of your poems yet, so sue me. |
if you mean u didnt read this one poem i posted up, its okay.
if u mean u didnt read any of my poems and pretended like u did, -____- die. (: |
I wanna get poetic or answer that question without really answering it, you know like politicians do, but the truth is that I read most of your poems but not all of them, and I did pretend to read some. 
Can you ever find it in your heart to forgive me, so that I can lie to you again about reading your poems?  |
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eyOjuiCy
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| Posted Sun Jun 22, 2008
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ashkits engar aziz.
u know how much i dont like liars -____-
and with me people dont get second chances cuz they are opportunities to fuck up again.
so no.
you> <me
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Darth-Vader
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| Posted Sun Jun 22, 2008
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| De du gites. |
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