Official Tiikniik Poem Thread

ThaR3al3stSixx26 · Member Joined: 30 Jun 2008 Posts: 99 Location: pasadena

eh my life has been twisted up side down

i dont know what i want and i have on a frown

thought my life would be good

but i now know it never would

im never fully content with what i have

want two things but only one i can

im in a phaze of desicion and i am confused

i feel no matter what i choose im destined to loose

so now im feinding for a blunt or a bowl

to take a hit and see my life pass by slow-mo

my life was destined my path was paved

now im at a toll stop and now its time to pay

i give in happiness and i take out grief

and god is the only one who might sieze

my life is like a rocky terrain

it has its ups and downs but in all its the same

always evening out never really on a mountain

wishing there was somthing of youth like a fountain

eternal happiness is what im doubtin

i guess if it wasnt for the bad the good wouldnt be

so im take this in the worst posibility

and when im climbing my mountain i can pause and smell the fresh air

cuz my next drop ; god... it will not scare

its kool Smile

Guest · Posted Wed Aug 20, 2008

nice, you wrote it yourself?

eyOjuiCy · Supreme Member Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738

i liked it sak (:
ur raps are better thoe. :]

ThaR3al3stSixx26 · Member Joined: 30 Jun 2008 Posts: 99 Location: pasadena

yeee i wrote it
its alright...
btw juicy its hovo. haha

eyOjuiCy · Supreme Member Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738

you said sako 0_O
liar.

ThaR3al3stSixx26 · Member Joined: 30 Jun 2008 Posts: 99 Location: pasadena

haha i know =-D u love it its ok

eyOjuiCy · Supreme Member Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738

debil es -__-
& no, i dont. i dnt like liars ;D

ThaR3al3stSixx26 · Member Joined: 30 Jun 2008 Posts: 99 Location: pasadena

not a liar buddy
just didnt want
my u know everythign out there
=)

eyOjuiCy · Supreme Member Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738

xextevi -___-

(:

*Shamiram* · Supreme Member Joined: 19 Aug 2008 Posts: 457

ThaR3al3stSixx26 · Member Joined: 30 Jun 2008 Posts: 99 Location: pasadena

thats fudge evil
lmao
sorry for the language lol

Jose · Guest

yo 626 your sh*t was nice, but eyojuicy's is wack.

ThaR3al3stSixx26 · Member Joined: 30 Jun 2008 Posts: 99 Location: pasadena

haha thanks

DEFINITION · Guest

This is more like spoken word but ya tell me what you think....

Open your eyes to the bullshit you see through everyday
But everyday u make false movements never to hesitate
Cuz life is a chess piece you are the board
So upon that mindstate what are you headed for
What is lurking in the abyss?
Staring in the dark depth ur eyes never to affix
For a man can lose his sight but never his vision
Even through any darkness it will always glisten
so I gaze silently ahead as if I see sometin thats really not there
as if even I, am a mere incandescence but i for one do really not care
for it is my drive and not imagination that provides the air for my soul
age is lurking oddly enough i really wont mind when i'm old
what is it you seek? what is it you believe
is it your air or the foolishness you were taught to breathe

eyOjuiCy · Supreme Member Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738

eyOjuiCy · Supreme Member Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738

Sanity isnt appreciated until you're fully insane
how can i say im suffering when im immune to pain.
there are no reasons, the way i was meant to be
look hard as you can, but you cant see the unseen
boiling blood running in my veins , but im cold
frozen hearted creature, let the story unfold
im standing next to you, but im absent in my mind
my presence might fool you, im the furthest from kind
no sign of emotion, even if you want me to grieve
indifferent to pleasure or pain, it might be hard to believe
full of life on the outside, but do you really see through me ?
not every lock comes with its specially made key
some times...some times...the stars begin to dance & speak
should i believe what i see or should i quickly blink ?
let the sun fall down ! , and let the waters reach the sky
sacrifice for thattt beauty, even if it meant for me to die.

Guest · Posted Sat Aug 23, 2008

:insert really awesome poem here:

ThaR3al3stSixx26 · Member Joined: 30 Jun 2008 Posts: 99 Location: pasadena

DAMN I wana fkin slap these foos

eyOjuiCy · Supreme Member Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1738

please, go right ahead :]

DarthVader · Guest