to eyo:
yr both poems are very beautiful, and in fact they are different one from the other, as they can be read separately, which I did
to darth-vader
here's one for you, in line with the personnality you want to show of yourself -stars war addidct, and especially the master who wears black as shown by the picture you posted,
so it will be a cosmic poem. ah another thing, I will write it direct on line, without any correction or rereading due to lack of time, so this is something entirly spontaneous
this happens on 327655 b.c.
I am sitting on the sidewalk having some bottles full of
fresh water from Andromeda
offering them to the passer by's
my body is an envelope
I can look, but can't see
I can listen, but not hear
stars ate my body (this one is borrowed from leonard cohen's song lady midnight, whicch I
changed a little, the wording is stars eat your body and the wind makes
you cold)
no one approaches me, they are afraid of what they see
through my eyes they can watch the infinity of the universe
and I can recall the time when ten centuries ago
I was passing on the same sidewalk
and heard that man who was offering in bottles
fresh water from andromeda
I was disgussed of drinking acid water
so I wanted to drink fresh water
and approached to that man who offered me
the fresh water from andromeda, whicj I drunk
and I don't remember what happened next
I found myself sitting here with some bottles of
fresh water from andromeda to offer them
and for ten centuries I still await and await
that someone approaches me
so I can continue my route on the sidewalk
and I continue to sit and offer the passer byr's
fresh water from andromeda
ouf that's it, hope it's not very depressing
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1667
Posted Sun Jun 22, 2008
aw thank u sweety<3
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Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Mon Jun 23, 2008
Fortunately im an addict of nothing. I am, although, a fan of the character Darth-Vader and grew up as a kid who loved the movie.
Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Mon Jun 23, 2008
The poem was interesting, where can I buy a bottle of the acid water from.
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1667
Posted Mon Jun 23, 2008
poof.
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hkd1 Member
Joined: 13 Jun 2008 Posts: 61
Posted Mon Jun 23, 2008
tiknik your'e lovely, even your post replies are panastegcakan
Kiso Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 312
Posted Mon Jun 23, 2008
yess ..my love is talented
n any one who doesnt like her poems is a * asshole who thinks too highly of himslef when in reality he isnt shit
walrus Guest
Posted Tue Jun 24, 2008
i like her poetry.
I also like turtles.
Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Tue Jun 24, 2008
Tik, I liked the poetic structure of your poem, though I didnt agree with alot of what you said.
Go now, and may the DarkSide help you to seek truth in the words you use for your poems!
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1667
Posted Tue Jun 24, 2008
thank u hkd & kis & walrus. <333
& dark, i dont believe u read it, and agree with it or not its all true. u needa kno how 2 make everythin possible (:
_________________ dont press your luck with me cuz ill prove you dat u aint so luckkyyyy(:
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1667
Posted Tue Jun 24, 2008
bam ! <3
_________________ dont press your luck with me cuz ill prove you dat u aint so luckkyyyy(:
Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Tue Jun 24, 2008
eyOjuiCy wrote:
thank u hkd & kis & walrus. <333
& dark, i dont believe u read it, and agree with it or not its all true. u needa kno how 2 make everythin possible (:
I did read it, sheesh man! 8)
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1667
Posted Wed Jun 25, 2008
how do I know ?
_________________ dont press your luck with me cuz ill prove you dat u aint so luckkyyyy(:
Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Wed Jun 25, 2008
Cause I got that, look I aint shittin you, look on my face.
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1667
Posted Wed Jun 25, 2008
that face looks constipated 0_O
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hkd1 Member
Joined: 13 Jun 2008 Posts: 61
Posted Wed Jun 25, 2008
good poem that one also about trust
as I said above, eyo pls don't waste your poems, maybe one day you'll have the
occasion of printing them in a booklet
Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Thu Jun 26, 2008
eyOjuiCy wrote:
that face looks constipated 0_O
Your the one wit the butt problem, not me.
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1667
Posted Thu Jun 26, 2008
shut up (:
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Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Fri Jun 27, 2008
A spoon full of sugar makes the medicine go down in the most delightful way.
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1667
Posted Fri Jun 27, 2008
rawr. (:
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