if you mean u didnt read this one poem i posted up, its okay.
if u mean u didnt read any of my poems and pretended like u did, -____- die. (:
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eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1741
Posted Fri Jun 20, 2008
:( hetuyks tsavuma =/
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Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Sat Jun 21, 2008
eyOjuiCy wrote:
Darth-Vader wrote:
I havnt read any of your poems yet, so sue me.
if you mean u didnt read this one poem i posted up, its okay.
if u mean u didnt read any of my poems and pretended like u did, -____- die. (:
I wanna get poetic or answer that question without really answering it, you know like politicians do, but the truth is that I read most of your poems but not all of them, and I did pretend to read some.
Can you ever find it in your heart to forgive me, so that I can lie to you again about reading your poems? 8)
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1741
Posted Sun Jun 22, 2008
ashkits engar aziz.
u know how much i dont like liars -____-
and with me people dont get second chances cuz they are opportunities to fudge up again.
so no.
you><me
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Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Sun Jun 22, 2008
De du gites.
hkd1 Member
Joined: 13 Jun 2008 Posts: 61
Posted Sun Jun 22, 2008
to eyo:
yr both poems are very beautiful, and in fact they are different one from the other, as they can be read separately, which I did
to darth-vader
here's one for you, in line with the personnality you want to show of yourself -stars war addidct, and especially the master who wears black as shown by the picture you posted,
so it will be a cosmic poem. ah another thing, I will write it direct on line, without any correction or rereading due to lack of time, so this is something entirly spontaneous
this happens on 327655 b.c.
I am sitting on the sidewalk having some bottles full of
fresh water from Andromeda
offering them to the passer by's
my body is an envelope
I can look, but can't see
I can listen, but not hear
stars ate my body (this one is borrowed from leonard cohen's song lady midnight, whicch I
changed a little, the wording is stars eat your body and the wind makes
you cold)
no one approaches me, they are afraid of what they see
through my eyes they can watch the infinity of the universe
and I can recall the time when ten centuries ago
I was passing on the same sidewalk
and heard that man who was offering in bottles
fresh water from andromeda
I was disgussed of drinking acid water
so I wanted to drink fresh water
and approached to that man who offered me
the fresh water from andromeda, whicj I drunk
and I don't remember what happened next
I found myself sitting here with some bottles of
fresh water from andromeda to offer them
and for ten centuries I still await and await
that someone approaches me
so I can continue my route on the sidewalk
and I continue to sit and offer the passer byr's
fresh water from andromeda
ouf that's it, hope it's not very depressing
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1741
Posted Sun Jun 22, 2008
aw thank u sweety<3
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Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Mon Jun 23, 2008
Fortunately im an addict of nothing. I am, although, a fan of the character Darth-Vader and grew up as a kid who loved the movie.
Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Mon Jun 23, 2008
The poem was interesting, where can I buy a bottle of the acid water from.
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1741
Posted Mon Jun 23, 2008
poof.
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hkd1 Member
Joined: 13 Jun 2008 Posts: 61
Posted Mon Jun 23, 2008
tiknik your'e lovely, even your post replies are panastegcakan
Kiso Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 312
Posted Mon Jun 23, 2008
yess ..my love is talented
n any one who doesnt like her poems is a * asshole who thinks too highly of himslef when in reality he isnt shit
walrus Guest
Posted Tue Jun 24, 2008
i like her poetry.
I also like turtles.
Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Tue Jun 24, 2008
Tik, I liked the poetic structure of your poem, though I didnt agree with alot of what you said.
Go now, and may the DarkSide help you to seek truth in the words you use for your poems!
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1741
Posted Tue Jun 24, 2008
thank u hkd & kis & walrus. <333
& dark, i dont believe u read it, and agree with it or not its all true. u needa kno how 2 make everythin possible (:
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eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1741
Posted Tue Jun 24, 2008
bam ! <3
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Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Tue Jun 24, 2008
eyOjuiCy wrote:
thank u hkd & kis & walrus. <333
& dark, i dont believe u read it, and agree with it or not its all true. u needa kno how 2 make everythin possible (:
I did read it, sheesh man! 8)
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1741
Posted Wed Jun 25, 2008
how do I know ?
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Darth-Vader Guest
Posted Wed Jun 25, 2008
Cause I got that, look I aint shittin you, look on my face.
eyOjuiCy Supreme Member
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 1741
Posted Wed Jun 25, 2008
that face looks constipated 0_O
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