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CHOOT81
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 Posted: 06/13/06 |
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Through all those years
their friendship grew.
They both felt the same,
but neither knew.
Each waking moment
since the day they met.
They both loved each other
sunrise to sunset.
He was all she had
in her terrible life.
He was the one
who kept her from her knife.
She was his angel,
she made him smile.
Though life threw him curves,
she made it all worth while.
Then one day
things went terribly wrong.
The next few weeks
were like a very sad song.
He made her jealous
on purpose he tried.
When the girl asked, "Do you love Me?"
on purpose he lied.
He played with jealousy
like it was a game.
Little did he know
Things would never be the same.
His plan was working
but he had no clue.
How wrong things would go,
the damage he would do.
One night she broke down,
feeling very alone.
Just her and the blade,
no one else home.
She dialed his number,
he answered, "Hello"
She told him she loved him
and hung up the phone.
He raced to her house
just a minute too late.
Found her lying in blood,
her heart had no rate.
Beside her was a note,
in it her confession.
Her love for this boy,
her only obsession.
As he read the note,
he knelt down and cried.
Grabbed her knife,
that night they both died.
She was found in his arms,
both of them dead.
Under her note
his handwriting said:
"I loved her so,
she never knew.
All this time
I loved her too."
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| Posted: 06/13/06 |
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| thats soo cutee..<33
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impartial eye
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| Posted: 02/17/08 |
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| CHOOT81 wrote: |
Through all those years
their friendship grew.
They both felt the same,
but neither knew.
Each waking moment
since the day they met.
They both loved each other
sunrise to sunset.
He was all she had
in her terrible life.
He was the one
who kept her from her knife.
She was his angel,
she made him smile.
Though life threw him curves,
she made it all worth while.
Then one day
things went terribly wrong.
The next few weeks
were like a very sad song.
He made her jealous
on purpose he tried.
When the girl asked, "Do you love Me?"
on purpose he lied.
He played with jealousy
like it was a game.
Little did he know
Things would never be the same.
His plan was working
but he had no clue.
How wrong things would go,
the damage he would do.
One night she broke down,
feeling very alone.
Just her and the blade,
no one else home.
She dialed his number,
he answered, "Hello"
She told him she loved him
and hung up the phone.
He raced to her house
just a minute too late.
Found her lying in blood,
her heart had no rate.
Beside her was a note,
in it her confession.
Her love for this boy,
her only obsession.
As he read the note,
he knelt down and cried.
Grabbed her knife,
that night they both died.
She was found in his arms,
both of them dead.
Under her note
his handwriting said:
"I loved her so,
she never knew.
All this time
I loved her too." |
Good riddance! She sounded like an imbalanced basket case anyway.
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tikniik
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| Posted: 02/17/08 |
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jana.
if only dis story was tru.
it feels like a tease man.
he loved her, she loved him.
dat never happens.
its only her lovin him nd him not givin a fuk.
so stop it wit these poems man.
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LadyLazarus
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| Posted: 02/18/08 |
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Sounds like somebody's been reading (no, who am I kidding--watching) too much Romeo & Juliet. Try Julius Ceasar, or Macbeth...diversify, my friends :roll: I'm sure you'll be able to draw just as many tragic parallels to your own little lives in no time. 
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tikniik
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| Posted: 02/19/08 |
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caesar ?
omg please no.
i hate dat shit 0_o
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LadyLazarus
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| Posted: 02/19/08 |
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| tikniik wrote: |
caesar ?
omg please no.
i hate dat shit 0_o |
ah yes, that insignificant trifle about empires won and lost; the course of human civilization changed forever.; honor, ambition, patriotism.... but we "hate dat shit 0_o" .. :roll:
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V8 piqued
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| Posted: 02/19/08 |
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| LadyLazarus wrote: |
| tikniik wrote: |
| caesar ? omg please no. i hate dat shit 0_o |
ah yes, that insignificant trifle about empires won and lost; the course of human civilization changed forever.; honor, ambition, patriotism.... but we "hate dat shit 0_o" .. :roll: |
If only these "tales" of yore had in them the latest hunk of the moment, or the pantiless celebrity hotty therein.
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LadyLazarus
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| Posted: 02/19/08 |
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| Mark Anthony was smokin'-- you just gotta picture him in your mind's eye...lol
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V8 recoils
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| Posted: 02/19/08 |
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| LadyLazarus wrote: |
| Mark Anthony was smokin'-- you just gotta picture him in your mind's eye...lol |
Uhh, yeah, I guess. :o
If all those Greek statues* are accurate representations of a typical Hellene of that epoch, EVERYONE was smokin' back then!
* The girly statues of course :roll:
Anyway, 'twas fun but I need to get some work done. 'night Double L!
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LadyLazarus
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| Posted: 02/19/08 |
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| V8 recoils wrote: |
Anyway, 'twas fun but I need to get some work done. 'night Double L! |
Me too! it's 3:00 am! lol and we're just now getting to work??!! what's wrong with us??!! lol
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tikniik
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| Posted: 02/19/08 |
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y tu brute ?
gna xextevi :]
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LadyLazarus
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| Posted: 02/19/08 |
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| tikniik wrote: |
y tu brute ?
gna xextevi :] |
that would be "et tu, brute" (this is in latin, darlin', NOT spanish!)
lol but i fear the point is lost on a 15 year old that says "gna xextvi" lol
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tikniik
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| Posted: 02/19/08 |
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| LadyLazarus wrote: |
| tikniik wrote: |
y tu brute ?
gna xextevi :] |
that would be "et tu, brute" (this is in latin, darlin', NOT spanish!)
lol but i fear the point is lost on a 15 year old that says "gna xextvi" lol |
LMFAOOOOOOOO
dude i love spanish .
es muy interesante no ? (;
nd yes casear can go xextevel.
:]
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LadyLazarus
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| Posted: 02/19/08 |
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| tikniik wrote: |
| LadyLazarus wrote: |
| tikniik wrote: |
y tu brute ?
gna xextevi :] |
that would be "et tu, brute" (this is in latin, darlin', NOT spanish!)
lol but i fear the point is lost on a 15 year old that says "gna xextvi" lol |
LMFAOOOOOOOO
dude i love spanish .
es muy interesante no ? (;
nd yes casear can go xextevel.
:] |
Yo pienso que nunca existira una reganada adequada para acordarte de los limites de tu ser.
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tikniik
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| Posted: 02/19/08 |
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u think that wat dont exist according to me ?
kay stop confusing me. (:
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LadyLazarus
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| Posted: 02/19/08 |
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| tikniik wrote: |
u think that wat dont exist according to me ?
kay stop confusing me. (: |
My dear, the above was meant to teach you not to talk back to adults... 
My sentence read: There will never be an ass-chewing good enough to remind you of the limits of your being. (so much for your spanish). :)
Poor little girl; okay, i'll stop 8)
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aquel incógnito
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| Posted: 02/20/08 |
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Yo pienso que nunca existira una reganada adequada para acordarte de los limites de tu ser. |
DamaLazaro, usted nunca césa de impresionárme con sus acrobácias mentales.
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LadyLazarus
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| Posted: 02/20/08 |
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| aquel incógnito wrote: |
| LadyLazarus wrote: |
Yo pienso que nunca existira una reganada adequada para acordarte de los limites de tu ser. |
DamaLazaro, usted nunca césa de impresionárme con sus acrobácias mentales. |
Se lo agradezco su confesion, caballero :oops: Pero dime, que deberia hacer al enfrentarme con el fuego de su juego verbal :oops:
<<<-----DamaLazaro Sumisa
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tikniik
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| Posted: 02/20/08 |
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| LadyLazarus wrote: |
| tikniik wrote: |
u think that wat dont exist according to me ?
kay stop confusing me. (: |
My dear, the above was meant to teach you not to talk back to adults...
My sentence read: There will never be an ass-chewing good enough to remind you of the limits of your being. (so much for your spanish). :)
Poor little girl; okay, i'll stop 8) |
um, mister perfect jan, even da english version doesnt make sense.
lmfaooo.
wow.
kay juss sus
thnks :D
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