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Pahhh
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Tue Nov 24, 2009
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im not the best with words..okay im hopeless
any ideas? just some idea's or a starting >.<
and a sonnet is where it rhymes abab abab abab aa
and each line has 10 syllables
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Iris
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Tue Nov 24, 2009
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Oh, I love Shakespearean sonnets! What do you want it to be about? If you give me a hint of what you're looking for, I can help you out or least try to. 
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Pahhh
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Tue Nov 24, 2009
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| Iris wrote: | | Oh, I love Shakespearean sonnets! What do you want it to be about? If you give me a hint of what you're looking for, I can help you out or least try to. |
thats the thing! :/
i can not find something interesting to write about lol
i started something..almost done but wow does it sound retarded 
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Iris
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| pahD wrote: | thats the thing! :/
i can not find something interesting to write about lol
i started something..almost done but wow does it sound retarded |
If you don't believe in your writing, no one will.
What topic did you write about? Hardship, love, pain, laughter..etc?
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Pahhh
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| Iris wrote: | If you don't believe in your writing, no one will.
What topic did you write about? Hardship, love, pain, laughter..etc? |
i wrote about..like a story.
she said make into a story i don't want just one topic
so its about like party i meet a guy nd somthing along the lines of that
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BH-818
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Tue Nov 24, 2009
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Ahh...
Hold fast, ides of November, For I am bound to thee, As the earths ravages cradle me, Till I lay in somber serenity.
there is something for u thing about
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Pahhh
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| BH-818 wrote: | Ahh...
Hold fast, ides of November, For I am bound to thee, As the earths ravages cradle me, Till I lay in somber serenity.
there is something for u thing about |
thats nice..really good
but no help at all my friend
whatever im done lol
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BH-818
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Tue Nov 24, 2009
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| pahD wrote: | thats nice..really good
but no help at all my friend
whatever im done lol |
glade to help  
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Pahhh
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Tue Nov 24, 2009
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| BH-818 wrote: | | glade to help |
your blind
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BH-818
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| pahD wrote: | | your blind |
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Iris
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Tue Nov 24, 2009
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The joys of yesterday still linger in my memory
The beauty of your smile I will never forget
I don't understand how it shifted so suddenly
But, over bitter goodbyes, I will not fret 
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Pahhh
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| Iris wrote: | The joys of yesterday still linger in my memory
The beauty of your smile I will never forget
I don't understand how it shifted so suddenly
But, over bitter goodbyes, I will not fret |
thats really good..if i need to write another one in the future
that makes for a good start (:
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Iris
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Tue Nov 24, 2009
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Ah, sorry. I didn't see the part you where you said you were already done.
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A Sonnet..
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